Wayne- Looks like you are off to a good start. While it is hard to tell from the photos, here are a few hints to start with.
1. The somerset fly show in Jersey is only about a 1hour drive from you. There are tons of tiers and you can belly up to the tables and ask questions and observe. I suggest the drive.
2. When you start tying, make a lot of one fly. I never tie less than 6 exact flies. It is more efficient, and believe me, the 6th is better than the first.
3. Thread pressure. In almost all situations the correct thread tension when you are tying is when the thread is just about to break, and when then hook is about to break! Use lots of thread tension, a real lot. Your tying quality will improve, and flies will be more durable. There are a few situations with hollow (deer, elk) hairs where you have to lighten up. Any yes, sometimes the first wrap needs a little less to capture and position, but concentrate on maximum thread tension.
4. I would find a good source on fly design to get the proportions down right. If I can find one on the web I will forward it to you. I have a few good books, actually more than a few. I have also attended classes. The proportions are critical.
Those are my beginning tips. Enjoy tying at the bench, and check out that Fly Fishing Show. It is a good one.