A friend asked me if I could tie something that resembled a fish head; he wants to use it ice fishing in Minnesota. We'll I've only been tying for a year, but I gave it a try. Its kind of a proto-type. But I'm open for suggestions, comments, etc.
I think you captured the impression of a bloody fish head just fine. Let us know how it works out for your friend who is going to use it. Pretty good imitation and different , sometimes different is the big factor.